![]() ![]() Having doled out that criticism, I found the second part of the story very erotic and enjoyed myself on more than one occaision rereading. There is no transition for this from the killing of her daughter, so the story doesn't seem in context.Īlso, since we know that this was non-consensual at the beginining, her consent in the latter half is incongruous with the rest of the story. The woman is completely enthralled with her submission to her Master. ![]() The second part of the stories which echoes of the movie and novel "Boxing Helena" is very different in its tone. As I studied butchering for hunters, I learned this. The bowels are supported by the stomach at the top and the bung at the bottom. Also, just as a practical note for your future stories, disembowelment must be accompanied by the cutting out of the bung hole (anus) first, so that the bowels are released from the flesh. The trauma from the opening of the wound would be enough to render shock and death. This on its own is compelling but is much more nonconsensual for my personal tastes.Īlso, one of the longstanding myths of Dolcett, what I call "Dolcett Sexual Romanticism", is that girls impaled and disemboweled somehow survive to be cooked alive. The first is the kidnapping and the death of Abby in front of her mother's eyes. There are two decidedly different stories here.
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